You let me do art
And not only thatYou help me with math
You make my life so bright
You even make a shiny light
You can calculate
You connect to the internet
You are necessary
to me and to everybody
Do you know who I'm talking about?
This right here is a computer alright
This ode is like a puzzle! Jiyoon, computer lets us do so many things that were unthinkable in the past. Your description also shows that. If you could write more sophisticated about computer, it would be more interesting because you used such a simple format and easy vocabularies in this ode. Try to use thesaurus to develop your writing!
답글삭제TA Hyebin