2011년 12월 30일 금요일

The Best Roommate Ever!!!


     My roommate in GLPS is the best roommates ever. This winter I came to Global Leadership Program for students. At first, I was scared,but with my good roommate Iris, I am having a good time. I like Iris, because she is creative which make us laugh and she is fun to play with. 
     First, Iris is the best roommate,because she is creative. She thinks of the thing which have to have the best imagination. For example, right above Kelly's bed, there is a two sunflower stickers to hide the scrapes. iris thought of the sunflower system.It is a fake system that when you are below it you can read each other's mind. So in front of other people such as our rest of the roommates or our room TA, Iris will tell me to guess the number she is thinking. Then she will do the hand exercise. So to know the number she is thinking, you have to count the fingers she exercise. If I say it and I get it wrong number then she says that one of the sunflower is smaller than the other so it doesn't work well.
     Next, Iris is fun to play with. She made this Dracula Sisters. It all started when Kelly didn't give us a paper cup. We started make a movie called a "Model Student" which tell us that giving a paper cup to us is a model. Also we made a CF for her paper cup. We also recorded a video of us bowing to her. But she wouldn't give it to me. So, we got an idea from doing all this,and we started to make music and CF. Then other of my roommates wanted to be our  manager and body guards, so we let them in. Now we take pictures and take videos. 
     I like Iris as a roommate,because she is creative and fun. Even after this camp I'll always remember her as a good friend.  
                          

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  1. Jiyoon,

    Overall, you did a good job on your essay. For the most part, you were able to present a central idea and develop your ideas from there by providing clear, concise details. Keep up the good work. As for suggestions, may I recommend expanding your vocabulary and composing varied sentence structures. I hope you continue to write interesting stories in class.

    Happy new year and see you in class!

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  2. Hi, Ji yoon. I'm Iris.
    It's really fun stories about me and you!
    I like this story so much.
    And thank you for call me
    'The best Roommate Ever!'
    Bye. And see you at the domitory room! ><

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